The 'w' sentence
Try starting your sentence with a 'w' word. These sentences maje your work sound thoughtful and knowledgeable
Remember the rule:not every 'w' word woks as a sentence starter
remember to put your comma in when the parts of the sentence affected by your 'w' are finished
Some 'w' words you can use:who,while,whilst,whereas,when,were,what,with.
examples:whilst the teacher was talking, the students were pretending to listen.
with a majority of the votes, hitler seized power
when the bell rings, we run to leave the class.
what did the parents say when the tripped over
when is the start of th e
Why he did it, I don't know.
The 'ing' sentence
Try starting the sentence the -ing form of the verb,
remember the rule:when you have finished your -ing phase, place a comma, then write the rest of the sentence.
some words you can use: listening,watching,running,reciting,realising,emerging, grasping, speaking,analysing,signalling,exposing.
example:realising the danger, people fled the city
shaking away the nerves,he approached the microphone
emerging from the water, the swimmer was geeted with cherrs
signalling the guard, the alarm went off
grasping at the boy, the parents were horrific to see the boy fall
watching tv frightend, while everyone else isnt
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